Sunday, October 28, 2012

How have American writers critiqued the idea of American exceptionalism?


Caitlyn Fong
H Block


In 1630, John Winthrop encouraged the New England Puritans to embrace the concept that they are chosen by God. Over the years, this idea has become known as American Exceptionalism. Although several valid arguments have been made for American exceptionalism, many American writers have critiqued it, including two contemporary ones. Sarah Vowell, a New York Times’ bestselling author, and Scott Shane, a writer for the New York Times, analyze this concept in different manners. Vowell uses tone to convey her feelings on American exceptionalism while Shane bases his evaluation on modern-day issues.
In her book The Wordy Shipmates, Vowell writes with a sarcastic and snarky tone. She indirectly criticizes American exceptionalism when she writes, “From New England’s Puritans we inherited the idea that America is blessed and ordained by God above all nations, but lost the fear of wrath and retribution,” (Vowell). She blames the United States’ arrogance on John Winthrop’s idea that the Puritans were chosen by God or, in other words, American exceptionalism. Vowell argues that America’s hubris has become excessive because Americans are not reluctant to act. They feel that they cannot be punished since they are superior, so they do whatever they want. She also mocks Winthrop by saying, “As I write this, the United States of America is still a city on a hill; and it’s still shining - because we never turn off the lights in our torture prisons. That’s how we carry out the sleep deprivation,” (Vowell). Her critique is that striving to be the center of attention causes Americans to overwork themselves, which may look good on the outside, but is internally detrimental. Vowell describes the United States as a country who tortures their people just to appear outstanding to the rest of the world. Through her snide tone, Sarah Vowell condemns American exceptionalism in her writing.
One of Scott Shane’s articles, titled The Opiate of Exceptionalism, studies the idea of American exceptionalism in relation to the 2012 presidential election. He argues that American exceptionalism harms the United States rather than helps it. Even though “[American exceptionalism] may inspire some people and politicians to perform heroically, … during a presidential campaign, it can be deeply dysfunctional, ensuring that many major issues are barely discussed,” (Shane). Presidential candidates want to win over voters, so they do not talk about anything that could question the United States’ dominance. The country’s serious problems are not deliberated, which keeps them from getting fixed. Likewise, Shane states that “[b]oth parties would rather avert their eyes from such difficult challenges - because we, the people, would rather avert our eyes,” (Shane). By ignoring how low their country ranks worldwide in many categories, Americans will soon become inferior to other countries without realizing it. No one is acknowledging that solutions are needed, so while the world is advancing, America will be stuck where they are right now, still thinking they are ahead. Scott Shane uses current events to analyze and critique American exceptionalism.
Two contemporary American writers, Sarah Vowell and Scott Shane, have critiqued American exceptionalism. Vowell reveals her scrutiny through her mocking tone of John Winthrop’s ideas, as Shane expresses his opinion by applying it to present-day events and issues. American exceptionalism has existed since 1630 and still continues to affect the United States today.

5 comments:

  1. I liked that you chose two writers to focus on and to compare to each other. If you had used three it could have become a little overwhelming. You made some really good points about their critique of American exceptionalism but I think it could have been a little stronger if you tied the two together more. You gave great information about each individually but I would have liked to see more comparison. Other than that, I did enjoy reading it and I found that you showed very strong passion and knowledge on the topic.

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  2. I agree with Jillian, focusing in one two writers was a smart choice because using three would be too much for the reader to take in. I think it would be helpful to mention in your thesis that Vowell and Shane both use different ways to critique exceptionalism, but have a similar opinion on it. Only after reading the whole paper was I fully aware that they both thought the idea of American exceptionalism was detrimental to the citizens. Also, I think the essay would have been more effective if you had expanded upon your conclusion. In what ways does American exceptionalism specifically affect the U.S. today? Other than that, you had great variation with your sentences and a lot of evidence to back up your argument. Your tone was also light, which made the largely factual essay easier to follow.

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  3. Great summary of two contemporary critiques of American exceptionalism, especially second one which brought a different point of view to American exceptionalism in our current political setting. You did a good job restraining your essay to just the point of views of these two writers, and didn't conflate it with your own beliefs on exceptionalism, which was very effective in answering the prompt directly. I agree with Jillian that the biggest thing that could be improved upon in the essay is the comparison aspect of it; you summarize the two writers views, but don't go particularly far in explaining how they differ. The thesis is also a slightly confusing comparison, as I don't really see how tone and evaluation of current politics interact. It may have been helpful narrowing it down to one area, for example only comparing tone of the writers or only comparing the point in history and perspective they are writing in.

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  4. I agree with Christine, your thesis did lack in actual comparison of the two writers, rather than just stating the fact that they both critique American exceptionalism through two literary devices. If you had taken your thesis to that next level of connecting the two criticisms with a common theme besides their basic content, your essay would have been taken from good to great! Other than that, I liked that you chose a text we had discussed thoroughly in class and put it side by side with a new text. Your essay is simple and interesting, and you had excellent use of quotes to support your ideas.

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  5. I love your idea of focusing on the different styles of two distinct authors rather than simply what they have to say about America. I enjoyed how you incorporated Vowell's sarcasm- it made your points really interesting to read and in analyzing her tone as well as content your evidence was twice as strong. I agree with Jillian that a way to make this even better could be drawing a stronger comparison between the two authors to further support your thesis. But this is well-organized and easy to follow, and you did a really good job exploring American exceptionalism from American authors' perspectives.

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