Is the United States an exceptional country? There are quite a few opinions on this question. However, there are two extreme viewpoints, with a wide gradient between; those who think America is an exceptional, and amazing country, we will call them the American "exceptionalists", and those who think a lot less of America. Those who disparage American exceptionalism as egotistical, or worse, just another brand of nationalism, often point to our disappointingly low rank in math and science scores for students as compared to other first-world countries. Many more are critical of America’s rank as the number one most obese country in the world. Many Americans are critical of their education, health, government. Still, despite all this negativity about America’s decadence and decline, there are still those American "exceptionalists" who believe that we are “a city on a hill”. What evidence do those people have that America is an exceptional country?
For starters, we have John Winthrop, the
Puritans, the beginning of something new and exciting. However, Winthrop was
English, in his lifetime the idea of independence was never touted. What was
his speech about then? Politicians today use the term, “city on a hill”, to
mean all of America. Winthrop probably meant, the colony, Massachusetts Bay;
perhaps on a hill, perhaps not. The Puritans, a community of Christians united
in their persecution, were supposed to set an example for Great Britain’s
Anglican Church. They were supposed to create a utopian society where the
covenant was only between God and his people. Their society was supposed to be
so great and amazing that Great Britain would follow them. Not very realistic,
but optimistic, and Americans like that. Now, compare that to today’s idea that
our cosmopolitan “melting pot” is supposed to set an example for, not Great
Britain, but…the rest of the world? Canada obviously would not change what’s
already working for them; the Greeks have made it clear that democracy is not
the way they want to go; China is… no. Maybe we can make some progress in the
Middle East? After all that is what the war in Iraq was for, to create a stable
democracy and not allow dictators or extremist groups to take control. And we
did all that by setting an example. Maybe we are exceptional. But no example
setting happened. There was a war “City on a hill” was not exactly what
happened.
One wonders whether or not there have been
cases of exceptionalism before. President Obama’s statement about the British
having British exceptionalism and the Greeks having Greek exceptionalism
answers that question; the “exceptionalists” responded with a resounding “NO”.
America is unique in its exceptionalism. However, what about China, calling
itself the “Middle Kingdom” until…. well, they still call themselves that.
Great Britain and all of Europe believed that it was the “white man’s burden”
to support all the other races and civilize them. Greece, when they defeated
the Persians had to have been thinking that they were chosen by their gods or
something when the Athenians received news that the Battle of Marathon was won.
According to the “exceptionalists”, none of those are examples of
exceptionalism, the belief that their country is unique among all others. No,
these are not “city on a hill” material; they are examples of nationalism.
What is the difference between nationalism
and exceptionalism? Nationalism is more self-centered. It has more to deal with
pride in one’s own country, rather than seeking to set an example for others.
Exceptionalism on the other hand, is the idea that America is qualitatively
different from all other countries. That America is chosen by God to lead the
world. It was the first colony to be founded by a diverse multitude of
immigrants, and from that somehow stems the belief that America should spread
its ideas about democracy to other countries. Why should America spread its
political or economic ideals to other countries? Spreading democracy and a
free-market is America’s duty. It does not matter whether or not the other
country has, maybe, a better political system than America, democracy must be
spread. Even if it is the type of democracy that divides electoral votes among
the states that sometimes fails to reflect popular opinion.
The question still remains; is the United
States an exceptional country? The answer lies in another question. What is a
country? Is it the territory that the people occupy? No, of course not, if the
Xia dynasty had settled in America for some reason and John Winthrop had
brought the Puritans to Beijing would that make America the “Middle Kingdom”.
No America would still be America. If it’s not the land, then it must be the
ideals, America is after all, a democracy loving, capitalist loving country.
Still, can ideals fight in wars; can ideals vote for their leaders, can ideals
believe in, well, ideals? No, it is tempting to think so, but ideals are
not the flesh and bone of a country. So, then, if it is not the land or the ideals,
what exactly is a country? Here’s one for you; a country is its people. America
is John Winthrop, America is the Puritans; America is the Africans, the Asians,
the Jews, the Arabs, the Indians, the Latinos and not just those. America is
the capitalists, the communists, and the Neo-Nazis. America is those who serve
and die in the military, and America is those who are surprised when they learn
that the national anthem has three more verses after “home of the brave”. Yes,
a country is its people. Is the United States an exceptional country? Are we,
the people, an exceptional people?
I really liked how you pulled ideas that we had discussed in class such as Puritan ideals translating into modern culture and what supposedly makes us exceptional and added your own ideas. Identifying the difference you saw between exceptionalism and nationalism was really helpful to the reader in understanding how you were looking at the topic. Also, I thought your point that a country was its people was very strong. I like how you used a casual tone, just be careful about misusing semicolons and elipses. Also, if you ask a question and then answer it, writing the question probably isn't necessary, it would be stronger if you didn't. Overall, great job!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Fiona - you blended ideas from class with your own, which showed your knowledge on this topic and made the piece very interesting. Your use of counterclaims to address both sides of the argument made your piece very strong from the start, but I'm not entirely sure which side you were arguing for. I like your style and tone, as it flowed very well and seemed as if you were saying this in a natural conversation. Also, your evidence was very relatable to today's world and addressed different countries too. I enjoyed reading this piece.
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ReplyDeleteThis essay is extremely different from typical essays in that the style was much more colloquial, with a conversation or internal debate happening occasionally in the middle of paragraphs. I think this style, reflective of some of the essays we have studied, is an interesting way to construct any piece. I think it was pretty effective in most places; however, the first body paragraph about the Puritans was slightly longer and wordier than it needed to be. The tone of the piece seemed to be more puzzled and pensive rather than provocative, a useful method to get the reader to digest all the information before they start to question any of the statements.
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