Monday, October 8, 2012

Is the U.S. an exceptional country?


IS THE US AN EXCEPTIONAL COUNTRY?
Jillian Jandl

            The United States of America has a foundation of unique ideas that cannot rightly be compared to other nations. While other countries take generic unifying qualities and try to apply them, the U.S. uses particular principles that make sense in making the nation exceptional. The United States’ governmental, economic, and religious views incorporate values that prove how exceptional the country is. All qualities of America value liberty and equality, making up an exceptional country for the people.

            The political aspect of America has been crucial to properly running the country from the beginning. Unlike other nations, a large amount of political authority was put in the hands of the people when the U.S. was founded. Early in the country’s existence, limits were put on the government to protect the people and to give the people the rights they needed to live the life they wanted. The purposes of the government and the restrictions on its authority were stated immediately after America’s separation from Britain in the Declaration of Independence. The founders wanted human rights from the very beginning to protect the liberty of the people and to base their power on what the governed people want. The Constitution and Bill of Rights then introduced more protection for the people, and reasonable laws that equally apply to everyone. America focuses on the exceptional qualities of protecting human freedoms and allowing society to flourish with a strong sense of liberty for the people. 

            Religion in the United States is a major reason that the country is considered to be exceptional. The nation does not follow the norm and set a common religion to unify the country. Instead, America gives freedom of religion as a written right of the people, stated in the Bill of Rights. While unity is very important, American ideals show that giving the people the freedom to practice their personal beliefs is more important in maintaining the happiness of all citizens. People desire to pursue their values, and America sees that it is wrong to force someone to follow a belief that they do not agree with. The popular government that exists in the U.S. allows religious faith to thrive and for the people to independently choose their own belief system. If government gives political power to the people, they deserve moral power as well, and this exceptional nation understands that. 

            In addition to these powers, economic authority is also given to the American people. Everyone has the right to work for a profit and to buy, own, and sell property. This is the basis of a well-run economy, while it is structured by the government, but gives the people all power to run the system within. Without strict limitations on the economy, the people have the means to pursue happiness and economic liberty. The free enterprise that is incorporated in American economy, allows businesses to flourish on their own and to receive all earning that they work for. This system is a major source of prosperity for the country and is the basis of the United States’ successful economy. The principles that America applies make for a prosperous nation. The people like having liberty in the economy to purchase, sell, and maintain and to independently run a business. These freedoms let people see America as an exceptional country.

            The view of the United States as an exceptional nation is an accurate evaluation. The liberties given to the people maintain their happiness, while also preserving a well-run country. Not only has America found ways to balance government power and power of the people, but the nation has also found ways to compromise, in the interest of the people. The government simply holds enough power to secure the people’s basic human rights to life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness. American principles provide the people with the freedoms they desire to stay happy and prosperous, and provide the country with a solid governmental system that the people trust. Together, these many impressive qualities make up the exceptional nation of the United States of America.

4 comments:

  1. I loved your point about "generic unifying qualities", especially in the paragraph about religion. I also liked that you specified the documents that state the rights you talked about. Maybe you could go into greater detail and give a quote or two from those documents, or give specific examples of how other countries' governments differ from ours. Another thing I liked was that you showed that America's values were present before it was even a nation, in the second paragraph. Overall I think it is really good, and I'm glad someone else posted!

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  2. I really liked your essay and the points you made in it. The structure was direct which made your focus very clear. Like Bryn, I liked how you went back to the basis of America, taking about past. But I agree with her in that you could have used a little more detail. Also, you could have extended your points a little more by using evidence of exceptionalism in the present to prove that Americans are still following the principles set in the Declaration of Independence for example. But overall great essay!

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  3. You provide great pieces of evidence that reinforce the significance of American exceptionalism by describing the U.S.’s political, economic, and religious values. However, you should further analyze your evidence by explaining how and why they emphasize American exceptionalism. For example, the second paragraph lists benefits which make America exceptional, such as social rights, but you could also address HOW those rights make America exceptional, such as by comparing those rights to the social laws of other nations. In general, this essay has clear, straightforward structure and has strong, focused information that successfully reinforces your view on American exceptionalism without getting off track.

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  4. You make very clear in your intro paragraph the points you are about to make in your essay. I did, however get confused on what your thesis was. I did not fully understand your argument (America is exceptional because the US' governmental, economic, and religious views incorporate liberty and equality)until the end of your essay, in your conclusion. That is okay, but it made it a little tough for me to fully grasp the meaning of the points you made in your body paragraphs. I agree with Bryn that you could have given more evidence in your body paragraphs and maybe give some quotes. I also think that Kasey is right that you could have provided a few more present examples but I don't think it would be necessary. Good job on the essay!

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