IS THE US AN EXCEPTIONAL COUNTRY?
Jillian Jandl
The
United States of America has a foundation of unique ideas that cannot rightly
be compared to other nations. While other countries take generic unifying
qualities and try to apply them, the U.S. uses particular principles that make
sense in making the nation exceptional. The United States’ governmental,
economic, and religious views incorporate values that prove how exceptional the
country is. All qualities of America value liberty and equality, making up an
exceptional country for the people.
The
political aspect of America has been crucial to properly running the country
from the beginning. Unlike other nations, a large amount of political authority
was put in the hands of the people when the U.S. was founded. Early in the
country’s existence, limits were put on the government to protect the people
and to give the people the rights they needed to live the life they wanted. The
purposes of the government and the restrictions on its authority were stated
immediately after America’s separation from Britain in the Declaration of
Independence. The founders wanted human rights from the very beginning to
protect the liberty of the people and to base their power on what the governed
people want. The Constitution and Bill of Rights then introduced more
protection for the people, and reasonable laws that equally apply to everyone.
America focuses on the exceptional qualities of protecting human freedoms and
allowing society to flourish with a strong sense of liberty for the people.
Religion
in the United States is a major reason that the country is considered to be exceptional.
The nation does not follow the norm and set a common religion to unify the
country. Instead, America gives freedom of religion as a written right of the
people, stated in the Bill of Rights. While unity is very important, American
ideals show that giving the people the freedom to practice their personal
beliefs is more important in maintaining the happiness of all citizens. People desire
to pursue their values, and America sees that it is wrong to force someone to
follow a belief that they do not agree with. The popular government that exists
in the U.S. allows religious faith to thrive and for the people to
independently choose their own belief system. If government gives political
power to the people, they deserve moral power as well, and this exceptional nation
understands that.
In
addition to these powers, economic authority is also given to the American
people. Everyone has the right to work for a profit and to buy, own, and sell
property. This is the basis of a well-run economy, while it is structured by
the government, but gives the people all power to run the system within.
Without strict limitations on the economy, the people have the means to pursue
happiness and economic liberty. The free enterprise that is incorporated in
American economy, allows businesses to flourish on their own and to receive all
earning that they work for. This system is a major source of prosperity for the
country and is the basis of the United States’ successful economy. The
principles that America applies make for a prosperous nation. The people like
having liberty in the economy to purchase, sell, and maintain and to
independently run a business. These freedoms let people see America as an
exceptional country.
The
view of the United States as an exceptional nation is an accurate evaluation.
The liberties given to the people maintain their happiness, while also
preserving a well-run country. Not only has America found ways to balance
government power and power of the people, but the nation has also found ways to
compromise, in the interest of the people. The government simply holds enough
power to secure the people’s basic human rights to life, liberty, and the
pursuit of happiness. American principles provide the people with the freedoms
they desire to stay happy and prosperous, and provide the country with a solid
governmental system that the people trust. Together, these many impressive
qualities make up the exceptional nation of the United States of America.
I loved your point about "generic unifying qualities", especially in the paragraph about religion. I also liked that you specified the documents that state the rights you talked about. Maybe you could go into greater detail and give a quote or two from those documents, or give specific examples of how other countries' governments differ from ours. Another thing I liked was that you showed that America's values were present before it was even a nation, in the second paragraph. Overall I think it is really good, and I'm glad someone else posted!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your essay and the points you made in it. The structure was direct which made your focus very clear. Like Bryn, I liked how you went back to the basis of America, taking about past. But I agree with her in that you could have used a little more detail. Also, you could have extended your points a little more by using evidence of exceptionalism in the present to prove that Americans are still following the principles set in the Declaration of Independence for example. But overall great essay!
ReplyDeleteYou provide great pieces of evidence that reinforce the significance of American exceptionalism by describing the U.S.’s political, economic, and religious values. However, you should further analyze your evidence by explaining how and why they emphasize American exceptionalism. For example, the second paragraph lists benefits which make America exceptional, such as social rights, but you could also address HOW those rights make America exceptional, such as by comparing those rights to the social laws of other nations. In general, this essay has clear, straightforward structure and has strong, focused information that successfully reinforces your view on American exceptionalism without getting off track.
ReplyDeleteYou make very clear in your intro paragraph the points you are about to make in your essay. I did, however get confused on what your thesis was. I did not fully understand your argument (America is exceptional because the US' governmental, economic, and religious views incorporate liberty and equality)until the end of your essay, in your conclusion. That is okay, but it made it a little tough for me to fully grasp the meaning of the points you made in your body paragraphs. I agree with Bryn that you could have given more evidence in your body paragraphs and maybe give some quotes. I also think that Kasey is right that you could have provided a few more present examples but I don't think it would be necessary. Good job on the essay!
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