What
is a butterfly? At best
He’s
but a caterpillar dressed.
The
gaudy fop’s his picture just
~ Benjamin Franklin’s “The Way to Wealth”
A
waft of incense flitted through the air, slithering through the cracks of the
double-doors and into the bedroom of a noblewoman. The third victim this month, the figure grimaced silently, cursing
at the reality of the situation. The masked intruder flipped a knife out from
within the folds of her black garb and wedged it between the doors, sinking the
blade into the block of wood serving as a lock. She edged the hunk of wood out of
the creaky wooden socket, an old contraption poorly suited to its purpose of locking
the doors.
She almost
laughed at the easiness of the job, but dared only to smirk, for if she opened her
mouth, the fragrance she was burning near the paper-sealed window would knock
her out cold. That was the only reason why the noblewoman, “Lady Mi Ling” as
the Sixth Prince had called her, had not yet woken to find her bedroom being
robbed clean. The young thief whizzed into the richly accessorized room, which
had walls laced in shimmery, scarlet silks threaded with gold, and searched the
polished drawers for the fully-stocked jewelry box that every wife of a Qing bureaucrat
was bound to possess.
The Sixth
Prince’s voice echoed through her head, urging her twitching fingers to finish the
job quickly and silently. She recalled his sleek voice enlightening her of his
advantageous position in the imperial court and his plan to capitalize upon
this favoritism by using luxurious treasures to bribe government officials.
Hence, her
mission to steal for him.
The figure’s
black lashes fluttered and a soft droplet of salty tears landed on her hastily put
together braid as she strived to grasp a memory, any memory, of a time when the
Forbidden City had been the image of peace.
But the
royal family was always at war.
Every
dynasty, the princes who were eligible for the throne fought, tooth and claw, to
be the next emperor. It was a tireless battle, dominating both day and night,
where every move could imbalance the delicate playing field on which the contestants
clung to so dearly.
Thieves
and traitors blossomed during such precarious times. Eunuchs and servants turned
against their masters, and kinship just became another justification for
murder.
She
shook her head, clearing her wandering mind of any thoughts. The mission was of
greater concern than the battle between the tyrants to seize the throne. The
Sixth Prince would have her beheaded if she failed him. Picking up the pace,
the young intruder pried off numerous poorly-crafted locks off of dressers
before she finally discovered the jackpot. Her hand stretched to touch the snowy-white
pearls that were encased by a sheet of silk dyed in the golden hue of the
emperor’s robes.
Suddenly, a
cold, metallic object contacted the back of her neck.
“Freeze,”
rang a voice of steel, “else I’ll end you now.” Before the girl could react to
the mysterious attacker, she experienced a sharp throb behind her temple and plummeted
to the floor, unconscious.
***
A
bloody hand clenched the ebony hair of the figure against the wall and yanked at
the disheveled braid attached to the head of the thin child. She shrieked, but the
echo of her dying voice ebbed away like the sound of a tree that has fallen in
an empty forest, without a soul to hear the dreadful noise.
“Tell us.”
The guard’s threat scraped harshly at her stubborn mind and the girl shrunk
away at his hardened eyes – no doubt from an eternity of torturing prisoners
like her.
“Should
you remain silent,” the venomous voice dripped on, “shame will be wrought upon
your entire family. Your life can only be spared by a confession.”
The weak girl
glared at him defiantly, her black irises glowering upon his stone mask,
watching for any flicker of emotion.
None.
She shut
her eyes tightly and prayed that this flogging would be quicker than the last.
Suddenly,
a callused hand tore at a sliver of parchment sticking out from within the
folds of the garment she was wearing.
“Aha,” he
mused slyly. “A message.”
He greedily
ripped the worn-out note from underneath the collar of her shirt and tucked it
in a small pocket under his azure robe, worn by all imperial palace servants.
Her heart dropped,
nearly reaching the floor.
She barely
noticed her torturer remove the shackles off her wrists and lock her prison cell,
nor did she register him taking off gleefully to receive his reward. As
footsteps echoed against the impenetrable stone barriers, the figure splayed
against the cracked floor sobbed, the image of the Sixth Prince’s signature
burning in her mind.
***
“He was
well-loved,” one man whispered, his voice barely audible to the other
bureaucrats crowding around him like a chaotic throng of gossiping housewives.
“He
constantly gave out gifts, always so generously. Although come to think of it,
the recipients always seemed to be the officials the emperor was favoring at
the time.”
“This is
disconcerting,” another one hissed. “His cover was flawless—there was not a
single complaint anyone could ever have about him. How could someone who seemed
so flawless actually be a dishonorable failure?”
A cold
laugh ricocheted across the massive chamber the officials had gathered in.
Every person turned to face the Fourth Prince, who had entered the room flocked
with lines of eunuchs.
“My sixth
brother was popular among many civil servants it seemed,” the prince calmly
stated, his face betraying none of tumultuous thoughts swarming in his mind.
“He was a
brave warrior and an accomplished scholar, the perfect combination to become
the heir,” the Fourth Prince admitted grudgingly.
“Were it
not for this unfortunate event, he may have become the Crown Prince. However,
we must accept his incapability to inherit this position and move on.”
Fifty-odd
braided heads bobbed up and down in agreement.
“I will
inform my father of this discovery,” he continued. “Please everyone stay put
until I return with my father to discuss what Sixth brother has committed.”
***
“OUTRAGEOUS,”
the towering figure thundered, hatred brimming from his voice with a noticeable
tint of sadness. He should have known of his son’s treachery. It ran in the
family. Not a single one of his own seventeen brothers managed to keep their
hands unstained the decade before their father’s death.
He stared icily
at the mountainous collection of precious jewels and metals that his Sixth son
was planning to use to bribe the bureaucrats. His eyes glanced at the bloody
girl dressed in black and he felt slightly faint. She was only thirteen, too
young to marry, but old enough to be a full-fledged member of society.
This was what
the war within the imperial Court had done to his people—it had transformed
them into tools and weapons the numerous princes manipulated to gain an
advantage over their own brothers.
A dying part
of his heart willed his mind to awake from this nightmare.
He had
been perfect.
So
perfect.
But too
perfect to be true.
Like the
monarch butterfly attempting flight before its time, his son had emerged from
his chrysalis too quickly, ripping his translucent wings and leaving his caterpillar-like
corpse to spiral down an abyss that would inevitably condemn him to the depths
of the underworld.
The
emperor closed his eyes dejectedly. A formidable weight engulfed his already burdened
heart of lead as he prepared to exile his young, but foolish child.
The way you developed the conflict, first with the thief, and then expanding the story to feuding brothers was nice and smooth. I especially liked the butterfly metaphor in the penultimate paragraph which is extremely well-written and complements your epigraph. Although it seems like you revise the epigraph in that sentence instead of reflecting on how your story supports the original proverb. The descriptive imagery in your story really brings out the Qing dynasty-era setting, with the constant feuding of brothers as the main conflict of your story. Overall, I think it's a very good story.
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